I feel, love in this world is like a dream
That at times threatens to be mighty true,
Rising higher from the humdrum like cream,
Disappearing then like a drop of dew;
Or at times feel, life is an onion peel,
You need will and vision both ways to see,
And aught with its apparent conflict deal,
For, world is both a myth and reality.
You sure see a plume of smoke but no fire,
And plumes do take many a form and shape,
If fire is not seen how can you the pyre?
Rid all logic— discard that robe you drape.
Life's all magic. Logic has not a clue:
Seed's tree, flower's fruit, or two cells and you!
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Sonnets | 12.12.2017 |
Thank you Rose Maries for a twain of appreciating notes, quite uplifting the spirit.
Liked the following lines that impart wisdom, to wit: " You need will and vision both ways to see And aught with its apparent conflict deal For, world.is both a myth and reality." Brilliant lines from a great poem.10+++++onto my Poem List
So very true. Love and life hold us spellbound. Their intricacies always caught us unaware. A beautifully crafted write full of wisdom.
Very nice poem on life and love.... well written. Love the last two lines: Life's all magic. Logic has not a clue: Seed's tree, flower's fruit, or two cells and you!
This world is just like dream and this dream gives amazing effect. Life rises higher and higher. Life is just like logical magic. This poem is very brilliantly and excellently penned.10
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Excellent poem, nicely written.10+++ my fav lines: Rising higher from the humdrum like cream, Disappearing then like a drop of dew; Or at times feel, life is an onion peel
Thank you so much Mohammed Nehal for the feedback so liberally given.