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The Moon

Rating: 4.5

the moon is night time's best apology
in hopes that loneliness won't reach your window
but you'll always miss the one you love
when there's moonlight on your pillow

Saturday, November 25, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: falling in love,loneliness,love,moon,nature,yearning
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
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I wrote this about 43 seconds ago, and I think it is kinda really cute.

If, by any chance, you know my writing, you'll know I love writing about the moon/space and this poem is part of my OCC collection.

Thank you for reading, if you like - give it a rate and comment! I'm very grateful for all feedback!:)

thank you! - EN
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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Chinedu Dike 20 June 2018

Beautiful love poem nicely encapsulated with artistic brilliance. A lovely creation. Thanks for sharing Evelyn and do remain enriched.

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Sandra Feldman 26 November 2017

Yes, there's something so nostalgic and romantically sentimental about the Moon. You have captured that feeling so well in only four lines. Very good!

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Bill Cantrell 25 November 2017

Oh what enchantment the moon has, it rules the night and has its own throne in poetry, funny how love or lost love is always connected with our majestic sphere, I very much enjoyed your poem, and am looking forward to reading more

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Edward Kofi Louis 25 November 2017

Moonlight on your pillow! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Robert 25 November 2017

Evelyn, this poem shows your appreciation for the part the moon plays in our lives. It gives hope to all.10 Robert

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