The Morning Triolet [a Triolet Poem] Poem by prashant shaurya

The Morning Triolet [a Triolet Poem]

Rating: 5.0


Each day when sun rises at dawn
and on their perch the sparrows tweet
heavenly pearls roll down my lawn...
Each day when sun rises at dawn
and rainbows on the sky are drawn
the cuckoo sings some melody sweet...
Each day when sun rises at dawn
and on their perch the sparrows tweet...

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

Bursting with beauty.

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Nihar ... 09 January 2010

seriously speaking i have read a triolet for the first time... and i m glad that i read a beautiful piece. ur triolet has a magnetic effect... u read it anytime and u can experience the freshness and charisma of the dawn.... well done......

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Amitava Chakrabarty 09 January 2010

A perfect ABaAabAB representation and the content has also a pristine touch. Well done.10

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Ravi Sathasivam 08 January 2010

A lovely poem with fine imagination. Well penned too. Yes, a poem to treasure. Enjoyed reading it Thanks for sharing with me 10+

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Jerry Hughes 08 January 2010

Nicely done Prashant, best, Jerry

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Sreeram Vasudevan 14 December 2010

good one! keep up the good work

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Dorcas J Kimosop 25 January 2010

a very beautiful piece............. wow thts nice

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Obinna Eruchie 20 January 2010

The arrival of the dawn complement by birds' jovial song makes the morning beautiful. A lovely piece penned!

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Ejaz Khan 17 January 2010

Nice work Prashant, yes, each day is a repetetion of a wonder, we never get tire of!

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Samanyan Lakshminarayanan 14 January 2010

very musical..a good one for a triolet...very well done

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