Each day when sun rises at dawn
and on their perch the sparrows tweet
heavenly pearls roll down my lawn...
Each day when sun rises at dawn
and rainbows on the sky are drawn
the cuckoo sings some melody sweet...
Each day when sun rises at dawn
and on their perch the sparrows tweet...
seriously speaking i have read a triolet for the first time... and i m glad that i read a beautiful piece. ur triolet has a magnetic effect... u read it anytime and u can experience the freshness and charisma of the dawn.... well done......
A perfect ABaAabAB representation and the content has also a pristine touch. Well done.10
A lovely poem with fine imagination. Well penned too. Yes, a poem to treasure. Enjoyed reading it Thanks for sharing with me 10+
The arrival of the dawn complement by birds' jovial song makes the morning beautiful. A lovely piece penned!
Nice work Prashant, yes, each day is a repetetion of a wonder, we never get tire of!
very musical..a good one for a triolet...very well done
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Bursting with beauty.