The Most Positive Person Poem by Lyn Paul

The Most Positive Person

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The Most Positive Person in the world has fallen into a hole
A broken marriage, she has lost her role
So unimportant and losing energy
No role to be herself to promote her glee
Wanting to do something valuable to feel a need
The most positive person in the world has done so many a good deed

Thinking so hard to not lose that positive desire
Fighting negative to stay out of the fire
She has an amazing gift of bringing life to those
She needs that seed before the wind blows

So The Most Positive Person in the world
Has lost her way
Desperate to find hope
To breathe light in to each new day


Copyright Reserved January 11th 2015
Lyn Paul

The Most Positive Person
Sunday, January 11, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: hope
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Hardship can be continuallysweptunder another's mat for that perfect life.
But we have to Let It GO.... what else can be done?
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mary Forrester 20 January 2015

You will come out stronger and wiser Lyn, looking forward to reading more of your beautiful poems,

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Evensong 19 January 2015

Once a rough passage has completed we emerge so much wiser with greater insight into ourselves. Like nature, our personal life has seasons; I have learned to embrace mine. You write so beautifully and your words tell me you have a selfless nature. There is too much love in you to be defeated. I hope to discover more of your fine work

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 19 January 2015

Oh this is sadening, the down episodes of downers when life seems grey n the blues. But positivity as u mention does wonders and helps us in not repeating the same lapses. See even the poem turned out excellent in rhyme n how u worded it. Warmest regards pal.

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Elena Sandu 16 January 2015

Take your time dear friend. Let it rain, your seed will grow to blossom into smiles again. After the winter, always comes the spring. Sending love.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 15 January 2015

Thinking so hard to not lose that positive desire Fighting negative to stay out of the fire She has an amazing gift of bringing life to those She needs that seed before the wind blows- - - - Very nicely envisioned. Many thanks.

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Alice Cordy 17 February 2015

Well written and stay positive. An inspirational poem even for me to be positive. Thank you for sharing :)

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Ruby Honeytip 08 February 2015

This is me..................

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Loyd C Taylor Sr 02 February 2015

Hello Lyn. Even positive people need help once in a while. I enjoyed your poem, Loyd C Taylor

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 24 January 2015

No one looks behind the scene. The most positive person has seen most negative things and no one else is there to help. Nice poem bringing this out.

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