The Most Positive Person in the world has fallen into a hole
A broken marriage, she has lost her role
So unimportant and losing energy
No role to be herself to promote her glee
Wanting to do something valuable to feel a need
The most positive person in the world has done so many a good deed
Thinking so hard to not lose that positive desire
Fighting negative to stay out of the fire
She has an amazing gift of bringing life to those
She needs that seed before the wind blows
So The Most Positive Person in the world
Has lost her way
Desperate to find hope
To breathe light in to each new day
Copyright Reserved January 11th 2015
Lyn Paul
Once a rough passage has completed we emerge so much wiser with greater insight into ourselves. Like nature, our personal life has seasons; I have learned to embrace mine. You write so beautifully and your words tell me you have a selfless nature. There is too much love in you to be defeated. I hope to discover more of your fine work
Oh this is sadening, the down episodes of downers when life seems grey n the blues. But positivity as u mention does wonders and helps us in not repeating the same lapses. See even the poem turned out excellent in rhyme n how u worded it. Warmest regards pal.
Take your time dear friend. Let it rain, your seed will grow to blossom into smiles again. After the winter, always comes the spring. Sending love.
Thinking so hard to not lose that positive desire Fighting negative to stay out of the fire She has an amazing gift of bringing life to those She needs that seed before the wind blows- - - - Very nicely envisioned. Many thanks.
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Well written and stay positive. An inspirational poem even for me to be positive. Thank you for sharing :)
Hello Lyn. Even positive people need help once in a while. I enjoyed your poem, Loyd C Taylor
No one looks behind the scene. The most positive person has seen most negative things and no one else is there to help. Nice poem bringing this out.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
You will come out stronger and wiser Lyn, looking forward to reading more of your beautiful poems,