The Murky Lake Poem by Rose Marie Juan-austin

The Murky Lake

Rating: 5.0


Defeaning honking
Of large entirely white swans
And water lilies
Bathed in lovely golden light
Give life to the murky lake.


Copyright 2021, Rose Marie Juan-Austin, All Rights Reserved

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Anjandev Roy 08 July 2021

Fantastic as usual.....thanks a lot.

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Sandra Feldman 08 July 2021

Wonderful version of swan lake.Just lovely!

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Sandra Feldman 08 July 2021

wonderful version of Swan

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Sylvia Frances Chan 08 July 2021

2) The sun gives life and light, and this special Golden Light makes it all. At least my eyes see this beautiful scintillating scene.Brilliantly put! . I truly enjoyed these well captured words

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Sylvia Frances Chan 08 July 2021

1) The murky lake seems alive again with the graceful white swans and water lilies, the sun that makes everything alive, very cleverly put poem in the wonderful light of the sun.

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Isadora Quagmire 16 October 2025

Lovely poem! So beautifully painted! Thank you for sharing : )

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Rebecca Navarre 25 July 2021

Beautiful imagery with beautiful feel! .. Can close my eyes and feel like I'm there! .. Love it! .. And ever so calming too! .. Definite 5 Stars! ..+++++

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Indira Renganathan 09 July 2021

Swans and water lilies are beautiful by nature...added sunshine is the most essential to make even the murky lake look beautiful....very amusing work...5*****

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Beautiful poem Rose! Loved it. Top stars

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Wow! Water lilies and Swans!

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Rose Marie Juan-austin

Rose Marie Juan-austin

Laoag City, Philippines
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