The Nagging Of My Cryptic Pillow Poem by nimal dunuhinga

The Nagging Of My Cryptic Pillow

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I couldn't sleep these days and I heard the whispering inside my pillow.
The feathers cried; ' You rest all the time but we stuck here permanently Sir, Our featherhead Boss! Don't you feel about the liberty?
We too like to fly in the serene sky and please let us come out of this thick pillow case.
We want the true freedom!

* To my poet friend Duncan.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Alison Cassidy 16 December 2007

This is such a cute poem Nimal. Your wit is unique and charming. Duncan is certainly a poet worth honoring and this light hearted piece certainly does him justice. Poor little feathers... love, Allie xxxx

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Sandra Fowler 15 December 2007

Praise for your rich imagination. Freedom can sometimes be a state of mind. Warm regards, Sandra

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Patricia Gale 15 December 2007

Interseting piece... you are a wonderful person Nimal!

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Duncan Wyllie 15 December 2007

A beautiful and fine present from a caring friend THANKYOU SO MUCH Love duncan X

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