How should I compose my song
For today’s night
Which verse to celebrate
The eventide
A symphony to greet
The Night of the Moon?
Like a heron’s wail through midnight
Or a bird’s warble at dawn
A pauper’s melancholy tone
Or a murmur of a streamlet that dances on the stones
Or like screams echoing across the vales
Or jubilant sounds on the shoulders of gales
My fingers tremble, totter
Between rapture and woe the spirits waver
Oscillations amid optimism and gloom
Some flowers wreathed for tombs
Tiny blooms stringed for tresses
Festivities, funerals, cries and laughs
Adorning lights, candles and epitaphs
A tune in mirth or a lament
To join gleeful lays or cheerless chants?
Hi Jasmine.I've read a few of your poems but enjoyed this one a lot. I like the way you fill each verse with so much stuff!
Nameless song but beautiful one, beautiful...Eid Mubarak and let stars sing it_Soul
Between rapture and woe the spirits waver Oscillations amid optimism and gloom Some flowers wreathed for tombs Tiny blooms stringed for tresses Great lines summing up the whole tone and essence of the poem! Enjoyed much! !
It's a nice poem, I read its Urdu translation as well, the original poem is really beautiful.
It's a wonderful poem. The poet's 'oscillations amid optimism and gloom' are clear and tangible. I would put my two cents on: 'a bird’s warble at dawn', and ' a murmur of a streamlet that dances on the stones', and ' jubilant sounds on the shoulders of gales', to sing 'A tune in mirth', 'To join gleeful lays'
Beautiful poem...Jasmine..Loved reading it.. Beautiful description on each lines...
nameless song a lovely write to join gleeful lays or cheerless chants?
beautiful poem, really beautiful poem i love it so much
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
You hold the pen tight, You let the thoughts out And ever and ever good poems will be drafted... Remarkably fascinating and winning our appreciation you have begun your journey on the PH.