The Needles Of Time Poem by Meriam Joseph

The Needles Of Time

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The needles of time, it is so really right,
You can’t get it back, it just passes by.
When you’re in a rush, you find it slips by,
When you’re doing nothing, it always respites.

You can get it back,
But you need patience, of course,
To invent a time machine,
So you can fly through time.

Just count sixty seconds,
And you’ll find it very simple,
To write a lovely poem,
Of this very kind.

It’s not long, it’s just short,
That’s what you really say,
“Just five more minutes with the television”
You’ll switch it off that way.

When you forget to bring or submit something,
“I’ll bring it tomorrow” you say,
But tomorrow never comes,
Because you are made that way.

Keep track of time,
Or you’ll lose it,
Time is really precious,
The needles of time never wait anyway.

© All Copyrights Reserved To Meriam Joseph.

Tuesday, August 9, 2011
Topic(s) of this poem: time
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Diana Kauke 19 August 2011

This is really amazing! ^^ I like the lines and the thought you put in them. Keep up the good job! ^^

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David Joel Rodriguez 20 August 2011

Nice work Meriam! 'Time is precious...lets not waste it'

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Rugyinsun Alwayslearns 21 August 2011

A nice poem. lets racing time

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Ken E Hall 24 August 2011

Original poem and the start in your time to write some super stuff you have the talent and read some of the masters works to get a sound grounding...regards

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Dorothy- A. Holmes 06 September 2011

A delightful poem...my pleasure to read...I am impressed that already you know the value of time and that it waits for noone. Dorothy A Poet Who Loves To Sing

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Sharif Tamal 01 January 2016

nice one. liked it meriam.. keep it up

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Jm Toboso 17 December 2015

meriam you are a genious, this poem artistically brings out the human folly of procrastinating. it couldnt have been expressed better than this. i love it n am keeping it to remind me of the need to act and work on all matters on time.kudos

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Chloe Lubinska 15 December 2015

Hi Meriam! Beautifully contributed statement about how the time we have we should make the most of it before the hands on the clock beat us at our own game. Please keep writing love reading your stuff!

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Abdulrazak Aralimatti 03 October 2015

Keep track of time, Or you’ll lose it, Time is really precious, The needles of time never wait anyway. Verily, time never waits for anyone

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Yinka Meander 30 June 2015

I love this poem. i am impressed with the quality of your thoughts Miriam.

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