# The Oldest Pair Poem by Samanyan Lakshminarayanan

# The Oldest Pair

Rating: 5.0


even if the woman receives 'a man' from her man
she delivers him as soft and silky as woman

the moon mom receives the valient sun's fiery sunshine.....
to convert it into that cool and soothing moon beam

the dad leaves the mom to nurture the world at night
to lull it to sleep with her sweet song so silent

the oldest household that may be
the oldest pair they may be

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Roshni D'Souza 28 May 2009

Insightful write with very aptly used metaphors! Thanks, roshni.

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Subbaraman N V 27 May 2009

The oldest pair the eternal one! Nice write!

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Lynda Robson 26 May 2009

An interesting write Sam, unique and refreshing, well penned, 10 Lynda xx

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Ashraful Musaddeq 25 May 2009

Lovely idea, you have used nice metaphor.10+

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Sandra Fowler 23 May 2009

Absolutely captivating. A luminous write.10, for your rich imagination. Warm regards, Sandra

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~ Jon London ~ 20 June 2009

What amazing vision you have Sam....stunning composition

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Indira Renganathan 06 June 2009

Beautiful imagination...nobody earlier would have thought of moon and sun as amma and appa I suppose..extraordinary poem

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Naseer Ahmed Nasir 01 June 2009

The moon and the sun, the oldest pair....wonderful image, Samanyan. Best Wishes Naseer

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Catrina Heart 01 June 2009

The Creator and His creations...........an ever existing pair who represents the yesterday, today and tomorrow...........10+++ for this lovely poem.

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Louis Rams 30 May 2009

to me the oldest pair would be GOD and universe. the poem has to get you to think about what is truely being said. good write

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