even if the woman receives 'a man' from her man
she delivers him as soft and silky as woman
the moon mom receives the valient sun's fiery sunshine.....
to convert it into that cool and soothing moon beam
the dad leaves the mom to nurture the world at night
to lull it to sleep with her sweet song so silent
the oldest household that may be
the oldest pair they may be
An interesting write Sam, unique and refreshing, well penned, 10 Lynda xx
Absolutely captivating. A luminous write.10, for your rich imagination. Warm regards, Sandra
Beautiful imagination...nobody earlier would have thought of moon and sun as amma and appa I suppose..extraordinary poem
The moon and the sun, the oldest pair....wonderful image, Samanyan. Best Wishes Naseer
The Creator and His creations...........an ever existing pair who represents the yesterday, today and tomorrow...........10+++ for this lovely poem.
to me the oldest pair would be GOD and universe. the poem has to get you to think about what is truely being said. good write
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Insightful write with very aptly used metaphors! Thanks, roshni.