Samanyan Lakshminarayanan


# The Positive Energy - Poem by Samanyan Lakshminarayanan

Where from will this flow into me
from what, from whom.from where
where from will this flow into you

from a stone worn on hand would it
from a shrine claiming divine would it
from one who claims to be divine himself would it

one through his yogic penance...claims
to have got this energies essence..captued
into a 'linga' in his premises...A SHRINE

a serene and calm place it is
the music of the flute there...did almost
put me to sleep in my trying to meditate

YET..A CAPTURED ENERGY DID NOT SEEM POSITIVE
EVEN TO THE SMALL 'me'

on my way back....a stop over
amidst the woods near a river..the uncaptured
chill river on my feet and breeze on my chest touched my soul

still live, free and positive are they
a captured... even if shrined and serene
POSITIVE ENERGY is'nt there i feel

IT IS 'CAUGHT' WITHIN ME
IT IS 'FREE' BEYOND ME
IT IS ALL AROUND WAITING FOR ME

THIS POSITIVE ENERGY


Comments about # The Positive Energy by Samanyan Lakshminarayanan

  • Louis Rams (6/2/2009 8:12:00 PM)

    an energtic poem, deep in mystery (Report)Reply

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  • (5/28/2009 6:34:00 PM)

    mine is called confidence... good write (Report)Reply

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  • (5/27/2009 1:44:00 AM)

    Yes, that precisely sustains us! A nice write! (Report)Reply

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  • (5/26/2009 1:53:00 PM)

    We all project and hold a certain amount of energy. (Report)Reply

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  • (5/26/2009 8:12:00 AM)

    well crafted with your own positive energy ++10.. from my own humble self I believe the biggest charge of positive energy comes from which I send to you is a SMILE'''
    regards
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  • Ravi A (5/25/2009 1:36:00 PM)

    POSITIVE ENERGY is'nt there i feel... Actually, we have to feel the positive energy since all the elements of the nature are really lending the same. Energy is deep within us but it is only less kinetic at various levels. Nature unlocks this energy and makes it more kinetic. Then we feel it to be positive. (Report)Reply

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  • (5/25/2009 8:18:00 AM)

    well crafted scientific logic into verses...well done...10 (Report)Reply

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  • Rajaram Ramachandran (5/24/2009 7:34:00 PM)

    In the field of electronics, there is nothing like negative, as the positive material (proton) is more positive and the so called negative material (neutron) is less positive. By nature, the energy flows from the more positive to the less positive (negative) just like water flowing from higher level to the lower level to keep the balance of level or power at every stage. In between comes the electrons, the hole current, that is playing a wonderful role in the field of electronics. This positive energy, a wide subject, is handled cleverly in this poem. (Report)Reply

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  • (5/24/2009 12:27:00 PM)

    hey i really like this. the theme is awesome. from my interpretation of it, it sounds like you went somewhere like a group meditation or something to find your energy and it ididn't work, but once on your way home you stopped by a stream and found it in nature. is that interpretation correct or am i way off? (Report)Reply

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  • Kesav Easwaran (5/24/2009 8:38:00 AM)

    You have a theme inside your mind...alright...but to call this a poem you have to work a lot thereon...words incongruous in many places...for your energetic attempt my 10 (Report)Reply

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  • (5/24/2009 8:25:00 AM)

    love this positive energy giood poem (Report)Reply

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  • Sandra Martyres (5/24/2009 7:05:00 AM)

    Yes as Indira says we are surrounded by cosmic energy......the focus of this poem..good write (Report)Reply

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  • (5/24/2009 6:27:00 AM)

    'a serene and calm place it is
    the music of the flute there...did almost
    put me to sleep in my trying to meditate'..positive energies are alwys coming from our positive vibrations...naizz
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  • Indira Renganathan (5/24/2009 6:20:00 AM)

    True, the divine or cosmic energy is in and around us...good attempt (Report)Reply

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  • (5/24/2009 5:47:00 AM)

    the science of energy in poetic application to life.........beyond explanation...10+++ (Report)Reply

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, May 24, 2009



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