The Parched Land - Tanka Poem by Rose Marie Juan-austin

The Parched Land - Tanka

Rating: 5.0

The white sun parches
The grassland and the meadows
Nimbostratus clouds
Sail through the sky like black boats
Parched lands wait for ample rain

Copyright 2025, Rose Marie Juan-Austin, All Rights Reserved

Wednesday, July 2, 2025
Topic(s) of this poem: clouds,rights,rose
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rebecca Navarre 07 July 2025

Oh Wow! .. Beautifully beautifully painted with such heart and soul! ..

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Aarzoo Mehek 03 July 2025

The cloud of mercy waiting to be drenched in it's eternal love. Soaking the parched lands n souls. Beautiful poem.

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Isadora Quagmire 02 July 2025

Well written! Excellent imagery!

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Anjandev Roy 02 July 2025

Brilliant as always..... thanks for sharing...

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Sandra Feldman 05 August 2025

To my Favorites!

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Sandra Feldman 05 August 2025

Feeling the scene! Totally, poetically, touched by the magic words of poetess supreme.

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Rob Lamberton 05 August 2025

We are a dry and thirsty land!

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Rebecca Navarre 07 July 2025

Brilliantly shared! .. Simply breathtaking! .. Endless 10'S And Stars! ..+++++++++++++++++++++++

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Rebecca Navarre 07 July 2025

Reading this makes me feel like I'm standing in the meadow looking towards the sky in anticipation! ..

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Rose Marie Juan-austin

Rose Marie Juan-austin

Laoag City, Philippines
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