The Rain Came Down Poem by Juan Olivarez

The Rain Came Down



The rain came down, upon my roof,
working it's way through tiny grooves.
It came through the tile, and the sheetrock,
On top of my tv, kerplock, kerplock.

Then there was smoke, and a little fire,
My wife screaming on, like a heathen choir.
And my baseball game, went on sans me,
And I now reside, in an inland sea.

9/25/15 Alton, Texas.

Friday, September 25, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: funny
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Hans Vr 04 December 2015

Very well written. a pleasure to read

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Smoky Hoss 08 November 2015

Brilliant humor Juan, hope your team won!

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Gobinda Sahoo 20 October 2015

Fine expression to suit the emotion.

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Cynthia Buhain-baello 02 October 2015

Very nice and charming, loved the wit and the humor, remarkable write.

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Liza Sudina 25 September 2015

you made this sudden episode very funny! Nice! enjoyed it! Smile!

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