Submission to God without reasoning repels me a lot,
Puppet-ism makes my blood hot,
Bleeds me into two horns,
Reasoning encourages me to ask,
Are the hands of the supreme to judge?
Atheism with profound reason,
Makes me more angry-
Reason is chocked in the clutches of anti -reason.
If expansion is the rule of reason,
Shrinking is, of course, the anti-reason.
Wisdom prefers to take a line-
A line of golden mean,
This makes me a fan of God,
A man of free thinking-full of liberty,
Having a pleasure to live in this world with high dignity.
This idea of anti-reasoning comes like a void to me; it's more like the absence of reasoning; ; and therefore the lines 'Reason is chocked in the clutches of anti -reason. If expansion is the rule of reason, Shrinking is, of course, the anti-reason.' are the bottom-lines of the poem; except that fact; it is a out of box and well written poem! ! !
wisdom prefers to take a line.. this line speaks a lot about healthy mind....10
the world is expanding with reason what is the reason of shrinking? - Is this anti -reason? perhaps yes'
Like it. The free thinking mind is the only way to live. A great poem.
The last stanza speaks out what most, infact all of us desire deep in our hearts by never dare to unleash it...beautiful piece of work!
A man of free thinking-full of liberty, .......that sums it up all
Solid phase bombarding the liquid phase! ! ...disperse and dissolve or just no....like ice bordering line in oil...the questions of something like this always avoidable for many people as they think, there's lot of things to do (that's the reason) but they are anti-reason that's why they dont want to listen any explanation...and that a sad thing to bear..Like an emulsion oil and water still can united as colloidal phase..when reason talk ear must open to understand...anyway anti reason always have reason why there are like that_Unwritten Soul
Yup! Your analysis on reasoning and anti-reasoning is perfect. I like this poem very much so I ended it up by reading 3 times! 10+++++ Thumps up to the poet for writing such an intelligent poem!
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
And so the debate begins, my friend... perhaps we may agree to disagree - agreeably! ?