man is not bad
atleast according to him
man is not evil
atleast according to him
man has this apparatus
the reasoning apparatus
with which he could
make good his bad
and without this man would go mad if he is still bad
an apparatus which pampers man to do bad
this reasoning one...sad
The thought is great, with streight simple expression. Every one will agree.10
True people always create reasons for something. Not concerned with right or wrong, if they even can determine that.
Thats why one has to stop reasoning And start meditating... Reasoning... Well explained poetically. How long one can prove self before others? ? When others respect the self... no need of this apparatus When others discard... one gets handicapped to use this apparatus. Good subject. Good Title. Thank you.
How true! we reason our bad into good! the irony of it all makes one laugh! nice thought!
Man can twist his reasoning, imagination apparatus to suit his needs and convert good into bad and bad into good. Very good thought. But this poem needs to be a little readjusted to make this diction more clear.
The first two verses of this poem are fine, samanyan, but you lost me with that third verse which makes no sense to me and is completely contradictory to the first two verses. You may want to rephrse that third verse so that it is more in agreement with the first two verse, or if it is to be contradictory, as least make it far more readable and understandable. Carl.
The first two verses of this poem are fine, samanyan, but you lost me with that third verse which makes no sense to me and is completely contradictory to the first two verses. You may want to rephrse that third verse so that it is more in agreement with the first two verse, or if it is to be contradictory, as least make in far more readable and understandable. Carl.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
A very cleverly written piece, by the voice of reason, thanks, 10 Lynda xx