* The Reasoning Apparatus Poem by Samanyan Lakshminarayanan

* The Reasoning Apparatus

Rating: 3.6


man is not bad
atleast according to him
man is not evil
atleast according to him

man has this apparatus
the reasoning apparatus
with which he could
make good his bad

and without this man would go mad if he is still bad
an apparatus which pampers man to do bad
this reasoning one...sad

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Lynda Robson 06 May 2009

A very cleverly written piece, by the voice of reason, thanks, 10 Lynda xx

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Ency Bearis 06 May 2009

interesting thought..a meaningful one..

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Sadiqullah Khan 05 May 2009

The thought is great, with streight simple expression. Every one will agree.10

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Joseph Poewhit 05 May 2009

True people always create reasons for something. Not concerned with right or wrong, if they even can determine that.

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Vidi Writes 05 May 2009

Thats why one has to stop reasoning And start meditating... Reasoning... Well explained poetically. How long one can prove self before others? ? When others respect the self... no need of this apparatus When others discard... one gets handicapped to use this apparatus. Good subject. Good Title. Thank you.

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Krishnarasa Seshadri 27 February 2010

How true! we reason our bad into good! the irony of it all makes one laugh! nice thought!

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Sathyanarayana M V S 16 May 2009

Man can twist his reasoning, imagination apparatus to suit his needs and convert good into bad and bad into good. Very good thought. But this poem needs to be a little readjusted to make this diction more clear.

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Eyan Desir 07 May 2009

Good write dear poet

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Carl Harris 06 May 2009

The first two verses of this poem are fine, samanyan, but you lost me with that third verse which makes no sense to me and is completely contradictory to the first two verses. You may want to rephrse that third verse so that it is more in agreement with the first two verse, or if it is to be contradictory, as least make it far more readable and understandable. Carl.

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Carl Harris 06 May 2009

The first two verses of this poem are fine, samanyan, but you lost me with that third verse which makes no sense to me and is completely contradictory to the first two verses. You may want to rephrse that third verse so that it is more in agreement with the first two verse, or if it is to be contradictory, as least make in far more readable and understandable. Carl.

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