As I stare at the moon above
Can't help but to feel sad
That I am admiring it alone
Admiring the beautiful moon.
But though he is far and away
A thought made me okay
He's staring at the same moon
And he will be home soon.
Lovely hope and lovely wish. Deep faith in your heart makes this poem so calm and beautiful. Well done.
I really like this one very much, sad but hopeful...is the hearts pang speaking Thank you
and he will be home soon.. full of the feeling of waiting in love. who is this lucky man..? thank you for sharing your inner feelings
I think lovers all over the world do this. Look at the moon or a bright, distant star and think of their loved ones. If the separation is for long, they long for their quick return. They spread the glowing moonlight on their bodies and feel a warm embrace of their beloved. Wonderful! 10/10.
Romantic, deep and touching verses. I'll always be a moon admirer..Cristina Teodor
Parapsychology with the moon.Sometimes i wish it happens what yu wish.If it does not though people will call you a lunatic, i will still call you a poet
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Universal objects always give solace. Great philosophy of life is reflecting in these humble lines. Nice work.