The Shadow Comments

There is a dark side to man's nature, often siezed by envy and conceit and in some it is so manifest! Such dark traits will definitely steal away his tranquillity! Beautifully put! !

Real good poem. I like the way you rhyme.

I enjoyed this very much.By the way, thanks for your kind comments about my stuff.On a similar(though not identical) theme you might like to read my poem..'The Template'. Neil Crawford

Very nice... Thanks for sharing...

Home run Val, another great write

such beaitiful words, excellent piece.

The poem flows like the shadow, with gentle rhyme and sinister meaning. Great work.

Interesting thoughths beautifully expressed.

This is what I call poetry! How beautifully written, the rhyme, the meter. The words just flow from one concept, thought, description, to another while maintaining perfect pitch nad beat. Bravo. Enjoyed it immensely.

Has Darkness ever been any more beautiful?

Val, Wow, This is a dark one for you! Great descriptions though. Just a very insightful look at the darker side of human nature. Dick

Carl would be proud of what you've done with his work, both Anima and The Shadow, will we see the trilogy complete with Animas? I doubt that Sigmund would agree.....

A beautiful heartfelt poem Val, mystical in the darkness of the shawow, so well written.

This has a deep, mystical aura all about it. Very well done. I just finished reading a very fine book about C.G. Jung, Jung the Mystic. So this poem goes deep for me. Thank you for writing it Valerie.

If only more people could 'see' the warfare that plays above the earthly head. Well written Valerie! ! Regards...Sharon.