Evening falls and windswept moon
Floats on dark skies, air sans tune,
Silence sinks me deep, all is still
Darkness weaves a web to fill
The heart with desire soft and dim
To peep into your eyes, a sweeping whim
Of taking your hand and to walk with moon
Like air that swells and swirls on dunes,
Escorting solitude and listening
To the lulling quietude, the light glistening
In eyes like glow worms, brightening the dusk,
Breaths drunk with night blooming jasmine’s musk,
Hearts drown in ecstasy of fragrance and liquid light
Bathes the souls in the mystery of moonlit night.
White aromatic flowers, moonlit night and the heart with desire soft and dim, what a painting is it!
Serene night fragrant with the smell of blooming jasmines and illumined with the silvery beams of the moon. No wonder the heart weaves a web of desire! Enjoyed! !
Quixotic poem seems as romantic scene is playing on in front of my eyes, as someone's heart feel true elation with the warmth of emotions & love.Bathes the souls in the mystery of moonlit night.....what a scene to be enjoyed....beautiful & romantic inside in nature with again rich fertility of diction...thumbs up.
You have written a lovely poem full of love and hope. It rhymes and flows well.
very fantastic portrayal of a night, very silent, the craft is nice one, too, the use of language and choosing of words is excellent, it shows you have good vocabulary.. lovely..10
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I would like to translate this poem
A wondrous ghazal poem embellishd further with d mention of moon, dune jasmine n musk, wow n wah!