The Simple Words Of Moments Poem by Eila Mahima Jaipaul

The Simple Words Of Moments

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the passenger
who takes the loneliest road,
sees the time
in which the trees
left a simple word,
in sheltered stillness,
on the mirage of horizon.

with a scarcity of lyrics,
as in, to stay, to leave...
the clouds upon the simple word
are our moments.

Monday, February 12, 2007
Topic(s) of this poem: scarcity
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kee Thampi 12 February 2007

The caper of real words makes a tranquil phace in this feeble..... the passenger who takes the loneliest road, sees the time in which the trees left a simple word, the poet love to makes a celebration in her little World...

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Ivan Donn Carswell 12 February 2007

This is beautiful, like a minimalist painting with exquisite brush strokes executed exactly. It is a stark but potent picture of the moment... Rgds, Ivan

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