The Skies Poem by LeeAnn Azzopardi

The Skies

Rating: 5.0


And the skies in yr eyes are
Never troubling
They are free as the wind
And I would want to feel it
But death to sanity is the only emotion I have
With darken clouds covering my mind
It was foretold by my tears
I wiah I could see clearly
But the problems I experienced,
Has curse my heart to rot
And all the while, I dream of
Those skies you bare

Monday, January 18, 2021
Topic(s) of this poem: skies,eyes,broken heart
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rose Marie Juan-austin 18 January 2021

A poem of great depth. Deeply moving and poignant. A well crafted write.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 18 January 2021

Wonderful depiction of a clean patch of sky...a poem of great philosophocal intensity... liked it.

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Anjandev Roy 14 September 2021

Such an excellent work.....thanks...

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Mahinda Abeysinghe 19 January 2021

Good use of imagery. metaphor of 'sky' is very revealing.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 19 January 2021

Very touching poem, tad melancholic, but surely 5 Stars and to my favourites.!

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Varsha M 18 January 2021

The skies in your eyes...and my emotions dark....the poem is do beautiful. You made experience snd emotions flow like a water in te brook... enjoyed your every expression. Thank-you.

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me poet yeps poet 18 January 2021

where are the skies only clouds fly

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