And the skies in yr eyes are
Never troubling
They are free as the wind
And I would want to feel it
But death to sanity is the only emotion I have
With darken clouds covering my mind
It was foretold by my tears
I wiah I could see clearly
But the problems I experienced,
Has curse my heart to rot
And all the while, I dream of
Those skies you bare
Wonderful depiction of a clean patch of sky...a poem of great philosophocal intensity... liked it.
Good use of imagery. metaphor of 'sky' is very revealing.
Very touching poem, tad melancholic, but surely 5 Stars and to my favourites.!
The skies in your eyes...and my emotions dark....the poem is do beautiful. You made experience snd emotions flow like a water in te brook... enjoyed your every expression. Thank-you.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
A poem of great depth. Deeply moving and poignant. A well crafted write.