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Tuesday, October 18, 2011

The Stars

Rating: 3.0
Souls of thought dance in gloom
Hopes and dreams of life abide to bloom.
Fresh air of solitudeness now I feel
Like the caress of breeze in my heel.
Memories opened their cave
To enchain me again as their slave.
Everytime I wanted to cage them in mind
As I've once suffered the rage of that wind.
Those were the days of endurance
And no one helped me in that furnace
Where I broke my bones to bossom,
The dreams that slept in my bosom
That was the saddest time of my heart,
Where I coudn't ride the life of my cart.
The pains that I hid under my skin,
I thought they were my akin.
I raised my head to the sky,
I never wanted to fly,
Without the wings on my shoulder
With the burdens on my shoulder
I gazed at the shining stars
They never did find my tears
I called them, my friend!
I never did act as a fiend.
To you my friend-
The stars,
With tears!
VIPINS PUTHOORAN
Topic(s) of this poem: love
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COMMENTS
Hans Vr 21 December 2016
What a superb poetic talent you have! Please, my friend, keep writing.
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Neethu Prasanna 19 March 2012
The pains that I hid under my skin, I thought they were my akin.....awesome lines: -)
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Sally Plumb Plumb 01 November 2011
Nice read.
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Wendee Isaacs 27 October 2011
that's awesome and soul touching
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Harindhar Reddy 27 October 2011
It is my pleasure to the poetic lines like these. I think the feeling expressed here by the poet is about a broken friendship or love or may be both. Whatever might be the reason yet i enjoy the beauty in these lines. 'And I gazed at the shining stars They never did find my tears I asked them, why didn't you become my friend? I never did act as a fiend. To you my friend- It is well articulated thought of the poet flowed all through the poem sprinkling adrenaline. Dearest poet you are laudable and commendable and appreciable and remarkable. Perfect 10 ++++ Effort.... Bye for now.... The stars, With tears! '
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Sandy Kulchyski 24 October 2011
that very pretty and very touching
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Ency Bearis 24 October 2011
A heartfelt well expressed emotion, well crafted thought
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Emelia Pattson 21 October 2011
it touch my heart.....great poem
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Lenore Lee 20 October 2011
My eyes stung as I felt your pain and wished to help. This is a truly spectacular poem, with that wisdom that only the pained can know.
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Aman Mulji 20 October 2011
A lot of wisdom resides in this poem. You have illustrated your feelings totally and in the best way possible. It was definitely a pleasure to read
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