I am waiting
For the sun
To pour out
Its golden hot oranges
And fiery flaming reds
But dreadful clouds
Claimed the sky
And obscured
The warm rays of the sun.
Most of the time
I see the clouds
Behind the sun
And my days
Are like the sunflowers.
When the clouds
Patched the sky dark
I am inclined
To paint the world
With gray.
Copyright 2017, Rose Marie Juan- Austin, All Rights Reserved
Well, that's a truly beautiful poem describing the connection between weather and the human mood! Fascinating!
Your great comment and visit, Kostas are much appreciated. Thank you.
I love nature poems and hence automatically attracted by the title. Very true Rose, nature does affect our mood. I enjoyed this :)
a very beautiful write about sun, cloud and the Mood of the poetess.
When the clouds Patched the sky dark I am inclined To paint the world With gray.----Beautiful expression of your mood through this lovely poem.
Beautiful poetic expression. Your closing stanza line brought a smile. Nice write 10+
I feel the intense power of your feelings....Most of the time/I see the clouds/Behind the sun/And my days/Are like the sunflowers! A beautiful poem..................................10
I see the clouds Behind the sun And my days Are like the sunflowers... seeing sunflowers everywhere even in the dark thinking of the bright sun is a powerful imagination my dear poetess. you have that power of imagination..... Make use of it to write wonderful poems. tony
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
'The Sun And The Clouds' is an elegant piece of poetry! Your poetic imagination has wonderfully sailed through the clouds touching the height of the sun.... A fabulous poem Rose......10
Such an amazing comment, Dr.Dillip. Thank for your visit.