The Sun And The Clouds Poem by Rose Marie Juan-austin

The Sun And The Clouds

Rating: 5.0


I am waiting
For the sun
To pour out
Its golden hot oranges
And fiery flaming reds
But dreadful clouds
Claimed the sky
And obscured
The warm rays of the sun.

Most of the time
I see the clouds
Behind the sun
And my days
Are like the sunflowers.

When the clouds
Patched the sky dark
I am inclined
To paint the world
With gray.


Copyright 2017, Rose Marie Juan- Austin, All Rights Reserved

Wednesday, November 15, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: nature
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Dillip K Swain 01 February 2018

'The Sun And The Clouds' is an elegant piece of poetry! Your poetic imagination has wonderfully sailed through the clouds touching the height of the sun.... A fabulous poem Rose......10

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 02 February 2018

Such an amazing comment, Dr.Dillip. Thank for your visit.

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Kostas Lagos 27 March 2018

Well, that's a truly beautiful poem describing the connection between weather and the human mood! Fascinating!

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Your great comment and visit, Kostas are much appreciated. Thank you.

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Bipasha D 22 March 2018

I love nature poems and hence automatically attracted by the title. Very true Rose, nature does affect our mood. I enjoyed this :)

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Nabakishore Dash 10 April 2022

a very beautiful write about sun, cloud and the Mood of the poetess.

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Bharati Nayak 01 July 2021

When the clouds Patched the sky dark I am inclined To paint the world With gray.----Beautiful expression of your mood through this lovely poem.

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Kesav Easwaran 05 March 2020

Beautiful poetic expression. Your closing stanza line brought a smile. Nice write 10+

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Dr Dillip K Swain 30 July 2019

I feel the intense power of your feelings....Most of the time/I see the clouds/Behind the sun/And my days/Are like the sunflowers! A beautiful poem..................................10

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Dr Antony Theodore 17 October 2018

I see the clouds Behind the sun And my days Are like the sunflowers... seeing sunflowers everywhere even in the dark thinking of the bright sun is a powerful imagination my dear poetess. you have that power of imagination..... Make use of it to write wonderful poems. tony

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Rose Marie Juan-austin

Rose Marie Juan-austin

Laoag City, Philippines
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