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The Task To Be Done

Rating: 5.0
now, after a gap of some years,
with your shabby, dried face
one heavenly task is left-

to embrace the flower vase on the table,
to pour water into it,
without touching the flowers, inside....
Saturday, April 28, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: loneliness,love and life
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COMMENTS
Rebecca Navarre 01 September 2018
Beautifully powerful! .. Thank you ever so much for sharing this! .. Ever so many 10S! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! +++++
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Dr Dillip K Swain 07 August 2018
'The task to be done' is a wonderful piece of poetry! My great pleasure reading it time and again!
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Chandan Dey 07 August 2018
Dear poet, It's my great pleasure to receive another inspiring comment from you. Your comment always makes me happy. I like to read your poems, as they sparkle with a synergy of emotions and intelligence. Stay blessed always my friend. Chandan
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Me Poet Yeps Poet 27 July 2018
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Me Poet Yeps Poet 27 July 2018
and this is what all poetry is about emotion a thought and words wrought lovely poetry sir
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Chandan Dey 28 July 2018
Dear poet, thanks for making such an inspiring comment. Chandan
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Dr Dillip K Swain 15 July 2018
A short and sweet poem! I liked the way you have expressed the theme! Thanks for sharing...10
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Chandan Dey 15 July 2018
Dear poet Dillip, thanks for making such a positive comment. Chandan
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Valentin Savin 23 June 2018
Well done Chandon! So emotional and deep. You are not lonely if you have something nice and dear to your heart to remember. Keep writing.10++++ Val
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Chandan Dey 23 June 2018
Thanks Valentin, for your inspiring comment. Chandan
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Sayan Dev 08 June 2018
Really this touches my heart-throgh this poem i discover the platonic love
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Chandan Dey 08 June 2018
Dear Sayan, thank you for your deep and meaningful comment. Chandan
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Doris Cornago 04 June 2018
I've shared on my FB wall, so others might be inspired as well. This is not loneliness for me but togetherness. Rated a 10+++++
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Chandan Dey 04 June 2018
Thank you very much. Chandan
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Doris Cornago 04 June 2018
This poem reflect my feelings as well about who I am, my purpose at the end of my journey, which is finally, to know the essence of the flowers and not the physical flowers, long gone. This is truly who we are, our worship lingers long after we're gone, Let's continue making poems and we will not perish. Thank you for making me see your heart, Chandan. :)
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Chandan Dey 04 June 2018
Doris, what a precise comment you've made! Actually a time comes in our life when we strive to touch the highest level (cosmic) of love. Somebody can feel, somebody can't but the endeavor goes on.... Thank you so much for making such an inspiring comment on the poem. Chandan
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Chinedu Dike 26 May 2018
A poignant rendition of words, well conceived and nicely crafted with artistic brilliance. Thanks for sharing and do remain enriched.
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Chandan Dey 29 May 2018
Dear poet Chinedu, thank you very much for your inspiring words. Chandan
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