The Thread Poem by Don Paterson

The Thread

Rating: 5.0


Jamie made his landing in the world
so hard he ploughed straight back into the earth.
They caught him by the thread of his one breath
and pulled him up. They don't know how it held.
And so today I thank what higher will
brought us to here, to you and me and Russ,
the great twin-engined swaying wingspan of us
roaring down the back of Kirrie Hill

and your two-year-old lungs somehow out-revving
every engine in the universe.
All that trouble just to turn up dead
was all I thought that long week. Now the thread
is holding all of us: look at our tiny house,
son, the white dot of your mother waving.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Susan Williams 23 March 2018

Those last three lines give me a lesson in how to close a poem! ! ! Excellently plotted. 10

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Edward Kofi Louis 23 March 2018

Head, lead! In the universe. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Anil Kumar Panda 23 March 2018

'All that trouble just to turn up dead was all I thought that long week. Now the thread'....is very nice. Enjoyed. Thanks for sharing.

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Bernard F. Asuncion 23 March 2018

Such a great poem by Don Paterson??????

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Kumarmani Mahakul 12 January 2018

This is interesting and amazing poem very beautifully penned. Jamie has made his landing in the world...10

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