Kim Barney

I was born in a bank - - my mother went there and made a deposit
Kim Barney
I was born in a bank - - my mother went there and made a deposit
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The Ugly Brother

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When I see my brother
we like to call each other
ugly just for fun.Of course,
he's very handsome.
I'm the ugly one.

He sez, you bin taken them ugly pills again
and I say well, I only took two but you musta taken ten!
Then I say you look like you bin whupped wit a ugly stick
and he sez I wuz but it din't take, but wit you it did the trick!

Then he sez when you wuz bein' born they thot you wuz breech,
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The Ugly Brother
Thursday, December 25, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: brother,family,humor
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
written 01 October 2014
Recife, Pernambuco, Brasil

deleted 25 December 2014 and resubmitted with new title in order to get rid of that obnoxious soundtrack added by PH

28 December 2014 title changed back to original
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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Elisha Wall 14 January 2015

I laughed wildly as I read it. This is a piece that cracks your ribs. Thanks for the good humours.

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Elisha Wall 14 January 2015

I laughed wildly as I read it. This is a piece that cracks your ribs. Thanks for the good humours.

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Darlene Walsh 13 January 2015

lol, very entertaining and fun to read.

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Grace Diane Jessen 28 September 2019

Very, very funny! Good one!

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Kim Barney 01 October 2019

Thank you. This is one of my oldest poems.

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Kim Barney 15 August 2019

Thanks to all who have commented. Sorry I can't reply to each one. My time is limited now and i seldom even log in anymore.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 15 August 2019

Amazingly humorous write. Only a few minds can create and construct such a unique and witty poem. The bond between brothers is just wonderfully portrayed. The photo that goes with this poem enhances the fun that this write brings.

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Kim Barney 15 August 2019

Rose Marie, thank you so much. Your comment is very generous.

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Annette Aitken 09 August 2016

Ha ha ha its great to have that rapore within the family, I'm the youngest of 7 so I know what you mean ha ha...loving the photo Annette

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A creative composition filled with sibling fun!

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