Amir Foroughi

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The Ultimate Mix - Poem by Amir Foroughi

Rage from a distant
The name unfamiliar
In the nights of old I always wished
In the longest year that had me down
These wounds kill time
My struggle sublime
Sold are the eyes I have
And cold is the wait for nothing
In dark I write my name in a long line
How is it possible for you to try?
Loving mother
He has come
To take your son
I'm swimming in the smoke
Of bridges I have burned
So don't apologize
And you're sure you've hurt in a way
That no one will ever know
But someday the weight of the world
Will give you strength to go.
This is not the end
This is not the beginning
Just a voice like a riot
Rocking every revision
But you listen to the tone
And the violent rhythm
The blame is mine alone
For bridges I have burned
So don't apologize
I'm losing what I don't deserve
What I don't deserve.
And so at last he came to me
With the echoing sound of eternity
Life is eternal
Birth is back to him
Back to begin
Back to earth
People laughed cried were silent
But he beheld me
Now it's the time
For sublime to go to him
Metamorphosis
Is the end to begin....


Comments about The Ultimate Mix by Amir Foroughi

  • Enoch Desewu (10/26/2012 12:44:00 AM)

    nice poem u have here. great poet u know (Report)Reply

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  • Ellias Anderson Jr.Ellias Anderson Jr. (8/4/2012 2:46:00 AM)

    wow..see, we all have nice works to share with others. this is one of them. nice poem my mate. keep the good work up! (Report)Reply

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  • Abhinit Chute (abz)Abhinit Chute (abz) (7/8/2012 1:50:00 PM)

    Excellent figurative language... I liked it... Carry On with More poems... :) (Report)Reply

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  • Anita KhelawanAnita Khelawan (6/21/2012 3:09:00 AM)

    hmmm... very intriguing i'm mind boggled.. thanx for sharing (: (Report)Reply

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  • Ekaterina M. PolischukEkaterina M. Polischuk (6/17/2012 5:34:00 AM)

    deep poem... with interesting philosophical thoughts...
    This is not the end
    This is not the beginning... wonderful line, very true.
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  • Abraham JaggernauthAbraham Jaggernauth (6/1/2012 2:51:00 PM)

    Good Poem and good theme! (Report)Reply

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  • Marieta Maglas (6/1/2012 1:35:00 PM)

    well written poem, inspiring...keep writing... (Report)Reply

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  • Rigzin NamgyalRigzin Namgyal (6/1/2012 5:24:00 AM)

    ..awesome writing...i loved every word of it....very powerful poem...keep on writing... (Report)Reply

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  • Neela Nath Das (6/1/2012 4:43:00 AM)

    Like live commentary it has a special effect of sound.As if you are talking face to face.Very nice indeed.Thanks for sharing it. (Report)Reply

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  • Sharad JunejaSharad Juneja (5/31/2012 7:36:00 AM)

    Very nicely written Amir :) (Report)Reply

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  • Hamytaf HushesHamytaf Hushes (5/25/2012 7:57:00 PM)

    Nice one Amir. You should write more :) (Report)Reply

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  • James Merchant (5/20/2012 2:17:00 PM)

    Very well written my friend, I can see you put a lot of time and effort into this one! Favorites! (Report)Reply

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  • Hans VrHans Vr (5/19/2012 7:00:00 AM)

    Sounds like the ultimate. very well written, great images
    Swimming in the smoke of the bridges burned.
    The metamorphosis.
    Poetry at a very high level, Amir.
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  • Ramesh RaiRamesh Rai (5/16/2012 3:29:00 AM)

    i like to vote this poem. great write (Report)Reply

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  • Grant LovellGrant Lovell (5/14/2012 12:51:00 PM)

    This is great! Very powerful, two years worth the wait. (Report)Reply

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  • Autumn Winds (5/13/2012 11:26:00 PM)

    I really like this poem. Every end is a beggining in one way or another and everything will end eventually. (Report)Reply

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  • Mir irfanMir irfan (5/12/2012 11:21:00 AM)

    I am not surprised on the fact that it took u 2 years to write such a master piece...... (Report)Reply

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  • Pheko Motaung (5/12/2012 5:47:00 AM)

    A great poem! Each line is written with true emotion.A fantastic wonderful brilliancy! Greatest ever poem for me.Thank you very much (Report)Reply

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  • Babatunde AremuBabatunde Aremu (5/12/2012 1:59:00 AM)

    Good poem. Sure, metamorphosis is all about man's existence. The poem points out the finality of man. One day we shall give account (Report)Reply

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  • Godfrey MorrisGodfrey Morris (5/11/2012 11:42:00 PM)

    Power Expressions of Emotions. Lovely Story line, sir my dear friend you did well on this one. (Report)Reply

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, May 5, 2012



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