The Unanswerable Poem by Bilal Raja
The Unanswerable
This verse is for God, if you’re listening down
If not I suggest you start listening now
‘Cause I got a little bone to pick
You took eleven year old Luke, what a home to rip
You never cared, what, were you not keen on Maddy?
And what about Kashy, how come he’s never seen his daddy?
What about me, wishing for a blade of luck
If you really exist, why you never gave a f**k?
I loved Louise but she chose Ewan's face
And I’ve lost all faith in the human race
In a world where terrorism still a continual threat
And what about the victims killed in Virginia Tech?
What about the evil filled with lies and bluffing?
And what about the good, that just dies for nothing?
What about life that’s cancerous
My dear Lord can you please answer us?
This is a deep question on which we should ponder an instant. I am an optimist and believe that God is answering our questions in way that cannot be envisioned at naked eyes. Ur faith only could lead you to happiness! This one is flowing so well. Good Job!
I think you write lyrics. And it fits to some kind of music I do not hear.
you should write a song..that's a compliment sweety...sounds like your mad the wrong person...remember God gave us a brain, AND free will.So don't be made at her, be mad at humans. But yea...good job.
I think thats the wrong guy to mess with. Just kidding, thats pretty good, the ending was perfect
poem was good as it gives message but why did you used obnoxius word p[oem is good but be careful never used obnoxius words send more poems to me
This comes from the heart - and shows a variety of anguishes, including about God, hard to beat that one, even love!
Very gud, agian...i luv the way u write, ur very talented...XDkeep it up10+
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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I think you have a very well constructed poem here, my young friend. I see a lot of bitterness, but I also see some honest questioning of Gods intent for our lives. You know, God gave mankind a most wonderful gift. The gift of free will. Each person chooses for themselves what direction they take. Being imperfect humans, we all make mistakes and bad decisions from time to time, often with bad results. and, often, innocent people are affected. To blame God for results due to wrong decisions by man is, not only, a mistake, but futile. O K, I'm getting down from my soapbox now. As I said, I think you have a well constructed poem. Thanks for the invite. Best wishes Richard