Dreams travel miles a day
To convey the thoughts of a day
Beyond the waves, beyond the sands
Bearing the minds in its hands.
Even if there is a storm or steam
Or the horror of an icy fall
It can go on with its gleam
In the mystery of sleeping hearts
Niranjan..........
That was good.....it's great how you guys from Keralyies write so well, maybe it has to do with the english that is so stressed upon there! Preets
very good, en, you are from the homeland of Tagore, and bless you be a great poet one day!
The fastest vehicle is thought, which goes next second to the other side of the world-a nice piece of work.
Subhash, Again, I love the premise of this… dreams traveling miles to convey things…. But on the nitpicky side the non-standard rhyme is distracting me a bit. Perhaps it’s just me on that count though… I tend to like a certain rhythm to my rhymes. I hope the critiques are helpful to you. Keep writing! -Eila
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Good poetry. Short, but fine. My salute to Keralite lyricists!