niranjan subhashsivan

Rookie (29-07-1980 / Trivandrum)

The Unseen Messenger.... - Poem by niranjan subhashsivan

Dreams travel miles a day
To convey the thoughts of a day
Beyond the waves, beyond the sands
Bearing the minds in its hands.

Even if there is a storm or steam
Or the horror of an icy fall
It can go on with its gleam
In the mystery of sleeping hearts
Niranjan..........


Comments about The Unseen Messenger.... by niranjan subhashsivan

  • Ranjan Kumar Ghosh (10/12/2017 12:53:00 AM)


    In the mystery of sleeping hearts10++(+++ (Report) Reply

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  • Rajaram Ramachandran (5/29/2007 9:00:00 AM)


    The fastest vehicle is thought, which goes next second to the other side of the world-a nice piece of work. (Report) Reply

  • (11/8/2006 11:05:00 AM)


    Subhash,

    Again, I love the premise of this… dreams traveling miles to convey things…. But on the nitpicky side the non-standard rhyme is distracting me a bit. Perhaps it’s just me on that count though… I tend to like a certain rhythm to my rhymes.
    I hope the critiques are helpful to you. Keep writing!

    -Eila
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  • (11/1/2006 8:28:00 AM)


    wow! ...this is a beautiful poem..

    Asma...
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  • (8/25/2006 3:30:00 AM)


    I like this soft and elegant poem. (Report) Reply

  • (8/24/2006 9:58:00 AM)


    A lot of strength in a short amount of words. Well written (Report) Reply

  • Wang Jie (8/16/2006 10:04:00 AM)


    very good, en, you are from the homeland of Tagore, and bless you be a great poet one day! (Report) Reply

  • (8/5/2006 9:48:00 AM)


    That was good.....it's great how you guys from Keralyies write so well, maybe it has to do with the english that is so stressed upon there!

    Preets
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  • (8/2/2006 1:57:00 AM)


    Good poetry. Short, but fine. My salute to Keralite lyricists! (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, August 2, 2006

Poem Edited: Friday, August 20, 2010


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