The Vacancy Of You Poem by Aqua Flower

The Vacancy Of You



A vacancy is in my heart
your love has gone away
and we have grown apart
no longer are you in my day
there is a vacancy in my heart
a certain emptiness I never knew
reflecting now on this reality
the vacancy of you

copyright @ Aqua Flower

The Lion & Tigress series

Wednesday, July 18, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: loss
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Riza Braholli 20 July 2018

Aqua is a very very nice poem. You managed to play so beautifully with being and the vakance! congrats! Big 10...... dr. Riza

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Aqua Flower 29 August 2018

thank you for this comment. I had missed it and did not reply.

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Irfanulla Shariff 19 July 2018

Poetic words are nicely uttered by an accomplished poet in this poem. Excellent write! Well done, Aqua!

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Aqua Flower 19 July 2018

What a lovely comment! thank you!

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Robert Murray Smith 19 July 2018

A vacant heart sings in this poem.+++10

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Aqua Flower 19 July 2018

Vacancies mean there is an opening to fill. So all hope is not lost! Thanks Robert!

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Carl Roussell 18 July 2018

An unoccupied/empty heart where even loneliness cannot be felt - a really good poem.

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Aqua Flower 19 July 2018

A really nice comment and good interpretation of vacancy of heart!

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