If you want to go to heaven
But your sins are all to blame
You may repent times seven
but still you may live in shame
Your faults may lie in waiting
and you might resort to liquor
Don't give in, just go to a friend
Dodgy Dave the Vicar is quicker
A fun title and some light-relief here, well done, Love duncan X
A tribute to a wonderful person, I agree. Dodgy Dave has been a fantastic support to me and it's nice for others to appreciate him, too. Thank you for this, JoJo. Love, Fran xxx
Very nice poem. David has helped me get through tough times and I thank him greatly for that. He is an amazing person. I give this a 10, amber xoxox
Ahh, Dodgy David - what an awesome individual, and equally awesome poet! Nice little tribute to a true man of the cloth. Nice piece, Jo Jo. Linda :)
I thought this was a clever piece until I read the other comments - and learned the source of your inspiration - Now it's even funnier! You pen comedy well. love, Allie xxxx
Your poetry reveals a light and happy ticker. Let it give many pause to think and enjoy a brief snicker :)
LOL! ! I don't know if 7 times would be enough for me..... HG: -) xx
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
JoJo... Your not supposed to tell tales about the vicar... Even when he is very Dodgy...