The Vicar Is Quicker Poem by JoAnn McGrath

The Vicar Is Quicker

Rating: 5.0


If you want to go to heaven
But your sins are all to blame
You may repent times seven

but still you may live in shame
Your faults may lie in waiting
and you might resort to liquor

Don't give in, just go to a friend
Dodgy Dave the Vicar is quicker

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Andrew mark Wilkinson 09 April 2007

JoJo... Your not supposed to tell tales about the vicar... Even when he is very Dodgy...

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Duncan Wyllie 09 April 2007

A fun title and some light-relief here, well done, Love duncan X

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Francesca Johnson 09 April 2007

A tribute to a wonderful person, I agree. Dodgy Dave has been a fantastic support to me and it's nice for others to appreciate him, too. Thank you for this, JoJo. Love, Fran xxx

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Amber Luce 09 April 2007

Very nice poem. David has helped me get through tough times and I thank him greatly for that. He is an amazing person. I give this a 10, amber xoxox

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Linda Ori 09 April 2007

Ahh, Dodgy David - what an awesome individual, and equally awesome poet! Nice little tribute to a true man of the cloth. Nice piece, Jo Jo. Linda :)

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Ben Gieske 07 November 2007

I like your sense of humor.

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Daniel Murphy 04 May 2007

such skill you have!

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Alison Cassidy 15 April 2007

I thought this was a clever piece until I read the other comments - and learned the source of your inspiration - Now it's even funnier! You pen comedy well. love, Allie xxxx

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Daniel Partlow 12 April 2007

Your poetry reveals a light and happy ticker. Let it give many pause to think and enjoy a brief snicker :)

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Original Unknown Girl 11 April 2007

LOL! ! I don't know if 7 times would be enough for me..... HG: -) xx

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