The Water Wheel Poem by ANDREW BLAKEMORE

The Water Wheel

Rating: 5.0


Upon the Palmers Brewery wall
The water wheel does gently turn,
Around, around the sodden spokes
In motion to the flow,
As there I stand upon the bridge
That spans the ebbing River Brit,
As peaceful waters glisten with
The sunlight's dawning glow.

The scent of yeast within the air
That floats upon this restless morn,
And clings unto the summer breeze
Like talons to its prey,
As grassy banks do bend and wave
With every gust that carries forth,
The linnet's song of sweetest joy
That sounds throughout the day.

Above the clouds do slowly pass
Amid the blue of Dorset sky,
That greets the pleasant countryside
Of rolling downs and fields,
While still the wheel does gently turn
Around, around the droplets fall,
Like silver raindrops they descend
Such grace their beauty yields.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Thad Wilk 10 March 2008

Every poem you write your descriptions are so precise, love it! ! ! *10plus* Thanks for sharing Andrew! ! ! Friend Thad

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Ernestine Northover 10 March 2008

I love poems of the countryside and nature. This is so lovely and so explanatory. Beautiful read. love and hugs Ernestine XXX

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Edwin Robinette 10 March 2008

What a wonderful poem! A great write!

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Duncan Wyllie 10 March 2008

I'd like to know which is my favourite verse here, but they are all wonderful, so then! I shall take this poem as a whole, Just brilliant writing again Andrew Love duncan X

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