The Way Back Home Comments

A poignant piece of poetry, well articulated and nicely penned in good diction with spiritual insight.

Congrats, it's a beautiful selection as members' poem of the day. Once I come back to you We'll count the seeds of the pain cherries I ate And rejoice at every such union we made Let me feign deafness While you whisper the way back home! ...beautiful lines.

Savour the silence of your smile And die in your separation in every poem.I like this line, thanks!

Beautiful! That Sufi love spills in each image so perfectly. Congratulations for a wonderful poem and member poem place.

Captivating with heartache and pain. We'll count the seeds of the pain cherries I ate Beautiful. Hope you found home.

Wild nights scream at me! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

super one loved it you may like my poem sun and planet...

Raaida, congratulations on your poem of the day.. James McLain

A flawless expression of thoughts cast in the Sufi mould. A real masterpiece. Thanks, Raaida Salik. I will.... die in your separation in every poem Once I come back to you We'll count the seeds of the pain cherries I ate

Wow - -what an amazing write ! It evokes such heavenly feelings.To quote a few lines- - - I will not surrender myself back to you In love, I smoke the cerise evenings Bathe in naked water Savour the silence of your smile And die in your separation in every poem Once I come back to you We'll count the seeds of the pain cherries I ate And rejoice at every such union we made

a lovely poem that seeks to connect once again to a higher being? ...................well written Raaida

Mysticism of this sort is the very height of this spiritual poem..........very well composed........outstanding piece..10 Cong. for being selected P.O.D

There is a lot of creativity and energy in this poem