The Whispering Wind Poem by Heather Burns

The Whispering Wind

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Looking for
serenity
the wind
gently
passes by

Softly
whispering
sweet
expressions
drawing me
ever nigh

Calling
catch onto
a leaf
come take
a ride with
me

we will be
together
throughout
eternity.









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Tuesday, July 23, 2013
Topic(s) of this poem: wind
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Geetha Jayakumar 24 July 2013

Gentle and pleasing to mind..Wonderful write...I liked reading it.

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 24 July 2013

Ride on a leaf to eternity. Beautiful. Thank you.

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Lucifera Santez 24 July 2013

eternity this way sounds like beautiful dream. a smooth, loving journey. calling catch onto a leaf, come take a ride with me. and what a delightful ride it is. :)

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Wahab Abdul 24 July 2013

you set a grand style for the post modern poetry with economy of words, flow, enery, and lay outs.. i like the way you express yourself through your poems which is a distinctive quality i find your poems whic lacks elsewhere... thanks for sharing your talent,

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Jesus Diaz Llorico 23 July 2013

So light, seems like you're floating. So beautiful.

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Adheez Van Der Beanthz 26 July 2013

beautiful poem with beautiful flow

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Yasmin Khan 25 July 2013

The whisper of wind and your wish of being together make it a lovely song.

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Yasmin Khan 25 July 2013

The whisper of wind and your wish of being together make it a lovely song.

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Valsa George 25 July 2013

Soothing lke the puff of a cool wind on the face! !

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Dave Walker 24 July 2013

A beautiful poem that brings the wind to life.

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