The Wish For A Sleepless Night Poem by lady grace

The Wish For A Sleepless Night

Rating: 5.0


i wish for a rain
it erases the trace of mourning
i wish for a silence
bury the marks of sorrow..

i wish for a thunder
it hides the noisy crowd
i wish for waves
they make a pleasant sound..

i wish for a candle
undemanding as it melts
i wish a dark night
it makes me sleep..

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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Shashendra Amalshan 12 September 2009

I wish I will never wake up when I sleep.. it gives such peace.. this is lovely write.. very nice to read...10 with lovess shan

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Dr Hitesh Sheth 11 September 2009

yeah god will definitely grant those harmless wishes........a good write......

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And I hope all your poetical wishes come true. You have wished for simple things that will help you heal and sleep. Beautiful words and tenderly written. 10 love Karin

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Carol Gall 10 September 2009

such lovely words llady 10

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Rafique Farooqi 10 September 2009

Some situation can mask the other, and as such we can dress our wounds and bruises, .......one pain which we accept can overcome the other, we are hard to accept. We a are able to keep our anxieties and sufferings forgotten by becoming indulgent in our daily routines, and having a miraculous self recognition, .... a wonderful write NAIZ XENIA

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Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 29 August 2010

‘I wish for a candle undemanding as it melts’ ~ Wow! Great philosophy in it…no getting only giving…. Thanks for sharing Regards Ms. Nivedita UK 10/10

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Ahmad Shiddiqi 16 September 2009

Sensitive and full of surprises. Keep writing!

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 15 September 2009

wish for a candle undemanding as it melts i wish a dark night it makes me sleep.. every subsance has got its own merits/demerits. it suggests one is meant for each other and love is to die for others.. you can hide but despite that you wish so many things..i wish all drams could come true....beautiful write....10 read mineall dreams cometrue.. what do i seek..

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Eyan Desir 13 September 2009

Hmmm sleepless Good write drink milk and you will feel sleepy nice write

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Anand Madhukar 13 September 2009

A poem amazing in its simplicity and serenity.

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