*** The Word Warrior *** Poem by Sulaiman Mohd Yusof

*** The Word Warrior ***

Rating: 4.7


Water vapors from Niagara
Awakened me
Feeling so fresh
And alive
Leaving behind the hustle
Of demanding life
I could smell the powerful
Perfumes of paradise
The angels whisper to my ears
“Don’t kill your thought,
The world would not be the same
Without you”
Olfactory sense of wisdom
Sneaks into my veins
I’ll write beautiful pieces
Like the Angels
So beautiful
Irresistible

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Pamela Rucker 07 August 2008

This sounds like a place that I would love to wake up next to every morning. If this wouldn't give you the inspiration to write of all GOD'S beauty, then I don't know what would.This truly is a paradise.Great poem to get you in that dreaming mode.

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Pamela Rucker 07 August 2008

This sounds like a place that I would love to wake up next to every morning.

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Rachel The Hair Guru 04 August 2008

Having been born and raised in Niagara Falls, NY this poem spoke to me. Thank you for sharing it and keep that poets eye in focus.

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Ron Flowers 02 August 2008

Very good stuff here. I give it a 10. Ron

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Rowen Cunningham 01 August 2008

i love it, your stuff is so beautiful. Keep it up! Rowen

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Ackroy Lashley 13 May 2009

Simply impressive! ! Continue to inscribe your art. Poetically yours, BajanPoet.

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Carol Fletcher 17 October 2008

This is the equivalent of a self - portrait or an auto-biography, You, my dear Sulaiman, are the ultimate Word Warrior!

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Maxislam Beauty 07 October 2008

this is awesome, you are making it with this, Angelic Realm.

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Chris Mendros 13 August 2008

'...Olfactory sense of wisdom/Sneaks into my veins...' Great images and sentiments here. Keep up the fight, warrior!

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Sw33t Girl 11 August 2008

Your description is fantastic!

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