**** The Legend *** Poem by Sulaiman Mohd Yusof

interesting! keep writing, Sir!

Well, this is an impressively written and expressive poem, Sulaiman, one that almost overwhelms the reader with it's thinly disguised sexual imagination. Still, as poems of this nature go, it is a well written poem that refuses to degenerate into something else other than imagination. Carl.

SULAIMAN, DEAR MASTER DESCRIBER OF THE SENUOUS AND NATURAL INSTINCTS TO BOND, YOU STEP AWAY FROM THE ANIMAL LUST AND EMBRACE THE POETRY THAT IS WOMAN, YET YOU MAINTAIN THE BASIC SULTRY UNDERLYING MALE IMPULSES SO BEAUTIFULLY. OKAY, SO WHEN ARE WE GOING TO HAVE THE PRIVILEGE OF READING YOUR SELF HELP BOOK FOR THOSE IN NEED OF FREEING THEIR REPRESSED AND WANTING-TO-STEAM URGES? WHEN DOES YOUR LECTURE AND VIDEO TAPE TOUR BEGIN? YOU'LL BE SOLD OUT IN EVERY CITY. LOTS OF WOMEN IN THE SEATS BUT THERE'LL BE AN EQUAL AMOUNT OF MALES. YOU ARE 'HOT' IN MORE WAYS THAN ONE. EVERYTHING YOU WRITE HAS HEAT AND INFO THAT COMBINE TO ACTIVATE LEARNING AND LONGING AND JEALOUSY! THANKS, CAROL

great stuff Sulaiman the descriptions made me want to wash up I really felt it

Beautifully descriptive words....thank you for this...

The extract from Kayla Nace's comment: Kayla Nace (10/21/2008 5: 18: 00 PM) THAT WAS AMAZING I GIVE IT A 10++ ^.^ ^.^

I find this a bit overwhelming. Such a powerful appealing to my senses.

Great works.. You can depict something so simple so beautifully.. Nice, Friends..

Sulaiman, Remarkably... Beautiful poems...10... Best wishes, Tsira

Ooooops nice poem i like it it is beautiful legendary I’m amazed!