Valerie Dohren

Gold Star - 7,360 Points (13 January 1947 / Southport)

The World - Poem by Valerie Dohren

Part of the world is bad

Part of the world is mad

The rest of the world is sad

When the banks of the Crimson River burst.....

The world is dead!

Comments about The World by Valerie Dohren

  • Captain Cur (5/11/2012 5:18:00 PM)

    I think I fit into line one and two, but I certainly don't want to end up on line five. Nice work Valerie. (Report) Reply

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  • Juan Olivarez (5/9/2012 5:35:00 PM)

    very well written, for the blood is the life. (Report) Reply

  • (5/7/2012 8:39:00 AM)

    Succinct and emotional, powerful. But remember, where there is life there is hope. (Report) Reply

  • (5/6/2012 4:29:00 AM)

    Wow, very powerful, and very true. fantastic poem. (Report) Reply

  • (5/5/2012 6:08:00 PM)

    this one hits like a slap in the face. good work! (Report) Reply

  • (5/4/2012 8:31:00 PM)

    I agree. An acurate discription of the place of our abode. Very good. (Report) Reply

  • Heather Wilson (5/3/2012 2:36:00 AM)

    Nice one Val, Don`t worry, we won`t let your Crimson River burst, we are on the way with buckets to bail out the water (Report) Reply

  • Diane Hine (5/2/2012 8:05:00 PM)

    Incisive observation. (Report) Reply

  • (5/2/2012 1:00:00 PM)

    This poem is to me a dew dropp that fell from an angel's eyes! Nice. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, May 2, 2012

Poem Edited: Thursday, May 3, 2012

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