The World Poem by Valerie Dohren

The World

Rating: 5.0


Part of the world is bad

Part of the world is mad

The rest of the world is sad



When the banks of the Crimson River burst.....

The world is dead!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Neela Nath Das 02 May 2012

This poem is to me a dew dropp that fell from an angel's eyes! Nice.

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Diane Hine 02 May 2012

Incisive observation.

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Heather Wilson 03 May 2012

Nice one Val, Don`t worry, we won`t let your Crimson River burst, we are on the way with buckets to bail out the water

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Walterrean Salley 04 May 2012

I agree. An acurate discription of the place of our abode. Very good.

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Captain Cur 11 May 2012

I think I fit into line one and two, but I certainly don't want to end up on line five. Nice work Valerie.

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Juan Olivarez 09 May 2012

very well written, for the blood is the life.

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Danny Draper 07 May 2012

Succinct and emotional, powerful. But remember, where there is life there is hope.

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Dave Walker 06 May 2012

Wow, very powerful, and very true. fantastic poem.

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Eric Cockrell 05 May 2012

this one hits like a slap in the face. good work!

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