The World Poem by MAHTAB BANGALEE

The World

Rating: 4.3


The world is such a restaurant of God
According to competence and strength
Where all spend time with well and woe
Through the little guest moment
In conscious-subconscious
Since years after years
On same rule of
Birth and death
As God's
Will



-November 15,2018 Chattogram






Syllabic Form- 10+9+8+7+6+5+4+3+2+1 = 55 syllables

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Last evening (NOV-14, ‘18)I was in local restaurant and having coffees after teas and observing the environments of restaurant. I observed so many types customers (child, young, old ages and different believers)were coming there and according to ability they were having drinking, eating and going back after paying bill. I also observed some local ruffians were coming there but after having drinking and eating they did not pay any penny cause of muscle power. This environment of restaurant is demonstrated subject of this writing.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rajnish Manga 19 July 2020

Quite an interesting poem.

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Hazel Durham 21 December 2019

A great write as God sits at every table as we eat and enjoy the food God is with us at the best of times!

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Akhtar Jawad 15 November 2018

World is obviously a tiny inn Where all do stay only for sometime, A great idea so nicely presented in a thoughtful poem.

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Muzahidul Reza 15 November 2018

The world a restaurant, .... well penned, World is obviously a tiny inn Where all do stay only for sometime, .....

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