Their Well-Being.... Poem by Sylvia Frances Chan

Their Well-Being....

Rating: 5.0


Their Well-Being....

I know a sumptuous lady,
she never uses
her mind,
every time she returns
from a long holiday,
she has more gayiety
in her way,

sans strong arm around her
she gave birth to ten babies
and raised them all herself,

too loose,
what a noose!
I can only pray for her
and the children's well being....

© Sylvia Frances Chan
Friday 31 July 2020
A cool dutch morn

This is a translation of the poem Hun Welzijn.... by Sylvia Frances Chan
Friday, July 31, 2020
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
too loose,
what a noose!
I can only pray for her
and the children's well being....

thank you for reading
and your comments, please

© Sylvia Frances Chan
Friday 31 July 2020
A cool dutch morn
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kumarmani Mahakul 02 August 2020

This is great to offer prayer for such a great lady who has given birth to 10 babies. She will definitely nourish them well by grace of God. She has reflected wonderful motherhood. We have become emotional reading this poem. This deserves full rating. An amazing poem is penned....

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 31 July 2020

A beautifully crafted thoughtful write. A concern of the great Poetess for the well being of others especially our children is indeed commendable and worth to ponder about.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 31 July 2020

A single parent raising ten kids will be hard up In providing the necessary care and attention for each and every child. However, if the parent has abundant resources and the government can extend some support then they will be assured of a great future.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 31 July 2020

Ten children require so much resources and attention. from parents who want to have their children have a great future. Children must be nurtured to become better citizens of the country.They must be afforded the rights and privileges for total development of their mind and body.

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M Asim Nehal 31 July 2020

10 number is quite amazing. May all babies grow well and support mother. Nice rhyme .I enjoyed your poem.

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Sylvia Frances Chan

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