Monday, December 29, 2014

There Are Those Comments

Rating: 5.0

There Are Those
Who can light up a room
Without any light
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Lyn Paul
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Anjandev Roy 14 January 2021

Magnificent write....thank u.

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Unwritten Soul 14 January 2015

Agreed with the comments, beautiful write_Soul

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Neela Nath Das 10 January 2015

A beautiful poem which bears the mark of universality.Loved reading very much.

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Hans Vr 09 January 2015

I love this poem. I hope it will be a source of inspiration to the youth of the world. We can be those, at least on and off, if we truly want it Out children can be those, at least on and off, if they truly want it. Wonderful poem, so energizing

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Kumarmani Mahakul 06 January 2015

Those who feed the poor Endlessly.....very beautiful lines in this poem shine across from to last. Very nice composition definitely.

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Soulful Heart 05 January 2015

Ther are those who write such poems and honour the anonymous those of our lives.......................

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James Fitzpatrick 02 January 2015

I like this poem a lot it's very clever without being too smart, a salubrious run of words to a finish

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Hazel Durham 02 January 2015

Brilliant write Lyn people are so complex and each person has their own unique gift to bring to their world!

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Sandra Feldman 29 December 2014

Phenomenal work, brilliant. One of the best ever read, Like gold it flows, Touches the heart with words so deep, A poem never to forget, And in our memory to set. Excellent! !

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Valerie Dohren 29 December 2014

Well said Lyn - there are many unsung heroes around who receive little recognition.

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