There Is More Poem by Eila Mahima Jaipaul

There Is More

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Can I call you my Love
As my heart feels it,
this very moment.

can I say that I love you
without thinking of the past,
and any possible extensions.

can I live with you,
in this moment,
if not every moment...

your love appears from nothing
and floats like a fog
over my soul
disappearing with little breezes.

do I have to care
about the lasting of it.

do I have the right
to make you feel clogged
instead of inspired.

I wish you to find a really wonderful muse
who can give more.
more, without taking from you,
more, by not walking away.

I'll let you go, because I want no more
constricted thoughts, of just wishing you more.

Thursday, December 14, 2006
Topic(s) of this poem: fog
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jon Lloyd 15 December 2006

The beautiful sacrifices made in the name of 'that ole devil'. Another work of beauty and depth. Jxxx

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