The stars above are shining clear
So far away yet
they seem so very near
These starry sky's possess the
loveliness
That mirrors so brightly,
within your eyes
~~
Sometimes night time clouds try
to hide my view
But their unyielding brilliance still
shines through
~
These starry sky's oh how they
hypnotize It's true. Their beauty
lights my most darkest
of nights, always there reminding
me of you...
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~TJW~
reads as if the words flowed at one go...straight from the heart!
I have said it before If we are going to write anything, then let it be written from the heart You have done this with this fine write Well done Thad Love duncan X
A beautifully romantic poem Thad, you are a star. Best wishes, Andrew
lovely read because you have penned a beautiful romantic piece...a 10 Thad.
Stargazers the world over will love this. Many night I sit and watch them wake. A wonder it is to behold thanks for sharing such a wonderful poem Michael
So soft and mellow and lovely, Thad. Romance at its finest, my dear friend! Just beautiful - '10++++! ' Warm Wishes, Marilyn
I love star gazing and this takes me back..and it is beautiful how you compare them to your love! ! Well done! Becca
Excellently woven with silken strands of romanticism. Deserves a ten but, it appears you have not voted for the option allowing readers to vote for your poems?
A pleasant poem for a loved one....too nice.....feels good while reading the lines...thanks for sharing...thad....10..
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Beautiful heartfelt piece....from the heart...thanks for sharing...Fi