Jesus was with Mohammed in a park near the lake
Buddha, Confucius and Mahabir Jain
Were sitting on another bench,
Eating some ground nuts, peeling off their shells.
Buddha said ' Hey Jesus - so long where had you been'
Smilingly he replied ' I was with Mohammed,
in his house during the last two days '
Mahabir was asking ' Hey - Confu, where is Hu En Sung'
' Taking a little more time to carry his own chair'.
All those friends were in a laughter
And welcome Hu En Sung.
They sang some light songs
Clapping and dancing together.
All the people, being gathered around them
Were humming with delight in a smiling face.
People around were of different color and beliefs
The park was filled with tranquility and peace.
Sun is set, darkness loomed
Silence is hovering around,
They all left the park.
The park is now in deep dark.
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Amitava (22.7.2014) 6-00 am
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A panacea is offered for a universal ailment through this poem which is a fruit of the fertile and heated imagination of a philanthropic mind. Congratulations on sharing 150th poem today, one can feel the sense of achievement Amitava Sur ji...best regards!
All religions preach universal brotherhood and all true prophets emphasize on the need to be bonded together, breaking the narrow boundaries of caste, creed and religion! Love should be the binding force! So you have brought together all great souls under one parasol! ! More commendable is the light air you have created. I nstead of making them preach great moral principles, you let them eat pea nuts, crack jokes, sing and dance.... Yes, such light moments lift the burden off life....! Congratulations on reaching this milestone! Conquer still greater heights, Amitava! Best of Luck! !
Amitava, I enjoyed how you brought these great and wise men together and put them on a human level i.e. talking and eating some nuts, enjoying one another's company. Their conversation was humorous and enlightening, singing, laughing, dancing like ordinary people. All religions together in eternity or heaven (the park) a peaceful happiness, the darkness felt serene, all wise men working together for mankind. A really great poem, Amitava. Thank you for all the wonderful comments you gave on the poems you read recently, I totally appreciate them. Congratulations Amitava on your 150th poem! ! ! ! I knew you would do great! ! RoseAnn
Amitava, I enjoyed how you brought these great and wise men together and put them on a human level i.e. talking and eating some nuts, enjoying one another's company. Their conversation was humorous and enlightening, singing, laughing, dancing like ordinary people. All religions together in eternity or heaven (the park) a peaceful happiness, the darkness felt serene, all wise men working together for mankind. A really great poem, Amitava. Thank you for all the wonderful comments you gave on the poems you read recently, I totally appreciate them. Congratulations Amitava on your 150th poem! ! ! ! I knew you would do great! ! RoseAnn
Congratulations on your 150th poem. Best wishes for many more poems flowing from your pen. Quiet interesting poem on this occasion. With your wonderful imagination you have brought all pious souls together in the eternity garden, enjoying the peanuts..... It's no doubt the park was filled with Tranquility and peace. Loved it.
Congratulations on your 150th poem Amitava. Such a beautiful serene write full of promise for a better future in a dark world! Thanks for sharing and best wishes!
They all left the park - this world. It is dark now yet they made it a better place to live. Congratulations on your 150. Look forward to your reaching many centuries.
Congratulations on your 150th poem. World today needs this poem. Hope all the leaders of today get together in a park and work to make life happy and peaceful. Enjoyed this beautiful poem written with great imagination and filling us with so much pleasant feelings.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Beautiful words to join us as one. Thank you and congrats for the big 150