M. Asim Nehal

Gold Star - 164,498 Points (26th April / Nagpur)

Think................ - Poem by M. Asim Nehal

In todays' time
streets have more light than our mind,
Roads are bigger than our heart,
buildings are taller than our ideas,
excavations are deeper than our thoughts,
Over bridge are better than our under relations,
gardens have more fragrance than our acts,
monuments are more famous than our names...
All in all values are more in words than in deeds.
We have grown bigger in our needs, but are hollow inside !

Topic(s) of this poem: satire

Form: Free Verse


Comments about Think................ by M. Asim Nehal

  • Edward Kofi Louis (9/10/2015 3:24:00 AM)


    Yes, let truth always lead the way in life. Nice work. (Report) Reply

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  • Sanjukta Nag (9/7/2015 11:28:00 PM)


    We have grown bigger in our needs, but are hollow inside! .... this is the present condition of us. we are making everything bigger than us and day by day we are becoming mean minded.
    such a wise thought. many many thanks for sharing
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    Mohammed Asim Nehal Mohammed Asim Nehal (9/8/2015 2:11:00 AM)

    Thank u so much for sharing your thoughts and reviewing my poem.

  • Abdulrazak Aralimatti (9/7/2015 2:46:00 PM)


    Truly, a lot of materialistic progress has taken place but still the moralistic progress has to take place (Report) Reply

  • Kumarmani Mahakul (9/7/2015 8:32:00 AM)


    All in all values are more in words than in deeds.
    We have grown bigger in our needs, but are hollow inside! ........so nicely you have envisioned dear Asim. It is a philoshopfical write you have wisely depicted and presented. Thanks for sharing ......10
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    Mohammed Asim Nehal Mohammed Asim Nehal (9/7/2015 8:52:00 AM)

    Thanks much and I really appreciate your comments, ...........

  • val Rogers (9/7/2015 4:23:00 AM)


    Yes. Truth speaks to the reader. I THINK Your message will travel to
    wanting hearts unnamed.
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    Mohammed Asim Nehal Mohammed Asim Nehal (9/7/2015 5:17:00 AM)

    Thank u so much for your kind words of appreciation.

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Poem Submitted: Monday, September 7, 2015



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