Think................ Poem by M. Asim Nehal

Think................

Rating: 5.0


In todays' time
streets have more light than our mind,
Roads are bigger than our heart,
buildings are taller than our ideas,
excavations are deeper than our thoughts,
Over bridge are better than our under relations,
gardens have more fragrance than our acts,
monuments are more famous than our names...
All in all values are more in words than in deeds.
We have grown bigger in our needs, but are hollow inside !

Monday, September 7, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: satire
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Edward Kofi Louis 10 September 2015

Yes, let truth always lead the way in life. Nice work.

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Sanjukta Nag 07 September 2015

We have grown bigger in our needs, but are hollow inside! .... this is the present condition of us. we are making everything bigger than us and day by day we are becoming mean minded. such a wise thought. many many thanks for sharing

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M Asim Nehal 08 September 2015

Thank u so much for sharing your thoughts and reviewing my poem.

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Abdulrazak Aralimatti 07 September 2015

Truly, a lot of materialistic progress has taken place but still the moralistic progress has to take place

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Kumarmani Mahakul 07 September 2015

All in all values are more in words than in deeds. We have grown bigger in our needs, but are hollow inside! ........so nicely you have envisioned dear Asim. It is a philoshopfical write you have wisely depicted and presented. Thanks for sharing ......10

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M Asim Nehal 07 September 2015

Thanks much and I really appreciate your comments, ...........

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val Rogers 07 September 2015

Yes. Truth speaks to the reader. I THINK Your message will travel to wanting hearts unnamed.

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M Asim Nehal 07 September 2015

Thank u so much for your kind words of appreciation.

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