This December Poem by M. Asim Nehal

This December

Rating: 5.0


This December is neither cold nor dry
Those chilling dark nights are elusive.

Wishes are stuck up somewhere
Neither flowing nor floating.

The moon seems pale and frail
Neither beaming nor gleeful.

Stars are dim and timid
neither bright nor twinkling.

Globe, this warming is making me sick
Give me back those cold moments of December.

Friday, December 4, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: couplet
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Me Poet Yeps Poet 05 December 2020

December cold if you want to feel in your bathroom under a shower do yourself shield here in CANADA come and share with me the chilly breeze the wet snow sheet the freezing of frost then you will say o sun come where have you been lost December is going fast lest for ages last life we can no longer live in a mask December go away fast don't for ever last

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Chinedu Dike 04 December 2020

Well expressed thoughts and feelings, a beautiful creation. Thanks for sharing and do remain enriched.

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Deluke Muwanigwa 04 December 2020

Lovely poem. No use praying homie. We gonna have to use science to reverse the damage or live scientifically so dont damage the environment. But yes even here we are fretting about global warming. Trump said its a hoax and commissioned coal mines. Nuff sed.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 04 December 2020

A very astute observation on December weather. Global warming brought a tremendous effect on the climate. Beautifully written couplet with great imagery. Five Stars! ! !

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Shreya Hacks 04 December 2020

December at its best for cold with exception this year due to Corona it seems.

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Unwritten Soul 27 December 2020

What is winter if it is hot like summer, as if what is dream without dreamer. Hope thing fixed as winter still in its season

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 08 December 2020

So true, Asim ji! December does not seem to be like December at all. There is no trace of cold or the temperature coming down. It is still hot and humid. A perfect poem that exposes the truth of global warming........5 stars

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Darren Jkoeryo 06 December 2020

DJ admire your keen observation.You are a thinking poem.

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Anjandev Roy 06 December 2020

Such a wonderful write.........thank u, dear friend.....anjandev roy.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 06 December 2020

Stars are not twinkling.. wonderful! Beautifully put....5 stars

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