..........Thinking.......... Poem by Susan Williams

Hey, you were about 1/2 way there! Susan, this is really funny. I thoroughly enjoyed it, even without sonnetification. Thanks for laugh, I've been smiling for the last 5 minutes. :)

Great expression in its brevity...loved this poem. Top score! !

it is very special moment of the inspiration and mind action in order to create a new lovely poem as usual by a brilliant poet such as Madam Susan 10/10 for sharing this amazing piece of work brilliant

Muse of poetry! ! Acts of love and life, Seeing them. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

This always brings smiles to me, even when it's dark and stormy, you come in with a warm beautiful sunny breeze! .. That leaves your readers smiling! ..Thank you again ever so much for sharing this! .. Ever so very many 10S! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ...............................+++++

I think you all will see me try my hand at a ghazal! ....good, very expressive of the poetic expressions you intended....... than k u dear poetess Susan. tony