This Dawn This Dusk Poem by Kumarmani Mahakul

This Dawn This Dusk

Rating: 5.0


Wow! so wonderful this sky is
With infinite mystery I witness
The beauty in this direction
I feel this dawn is so precious.

This dusk sings sure to take me
To the next dawn I eagerly wait
Miracle law works to twist here
Father of haven fixes play pure.

Nature is wonderful to act within
You write to convey this message
Birds sing and animals roar more
Fortune is bright with real zeal.

This dawn and this dusk I feel
Father of heaven writes letters
To note answers of creatures
He waits to read these two folds.

Wednesday, June 29, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: nature,nature love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Eric Cockrell 29 June 2016

Conveys very well the value of life!

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Lubinda Lubinda 30 June 2016

What a lovely poem! though the dawn and dusk are mysterious, God's creatures still come out to declare how beautiful it is, they assure us of the Father's presence, as they attest to the fact that nature is indeed God's handy work. Awesome poem thanks for sharing!

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M Asim Nehal 30 June 2016

Between the dawn and dusk you described the beauty of the nature in true sense.10++++

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Edward Kofi Louis 30 June 2016

The beauty in this direction! ! And to respect nature. Nice piece of work.

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Rajnish Manga 29 June 2016

This dawn and this dusk I feel Father of heaven writes letters /.....Dawn to dusk and dusk to dawn makes a full circle through which the Almighty conveys His message and opens up the mysteries of life. Thanks.

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Kelly Kurt 29 June 2016

Nature is very special to me, and dawn and dusk are two of my favorite times

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Kumarmani Mahakul

Kumarmani Mahakul

Gandam, Dist-Deogarh, Odisha, INDIA
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