This Is Action That Punishes Poem by Kumarmani Mahakul

This Is Action That Punishes

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We become worried for suffering,
Sorrow breaks us giving agony,
We pray God to give relief from,
Nobody likes problems in life.

We are free to perform actions,
Knowingly or unknowingly,
Due to negative vibrations,
We commit mistakes in our actions.

Through bad action sin is earned,
Action gives reaction sooner or later,
Without giving fruit this does not go,
We should be careful in life always.

This is our action that punishes us,
We should stay away from negativity,
Negative motivation is dangerous,
We need no sufferings in life.

© Kumarmani Mahakul,5, July 2017. All rights reserve.

Wednesday, July 5, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: action,reality,truth
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Edward Kofi Louis 11 November 2017

To stay away from negativity! ! Nice advice. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Rowdy James 03 November 2020

Each action brings reaction. Sinful actions give us punishment. This poem is just brilliant.

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Valsa George 29 July 2020

True...! All of us long for happiness! All our actions are centred on earning joy and success in life. If we should get a joyful life, we have to tune our actions in such a way as to receive good results! Every action has an equal and opposite reaction. Thus we are taught to sow good seeds to yield and harvest good crops. A poem of lofty thoughts!

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Pushpendra Patel 02 March 2019

As per action we receive reaction. This is very true really. Sweet flute of God produces sweet sound for learning. We feel God's love with greatest sweetness. His flute is nice. You are a nice poet and this poem is an excellent poem.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 13 November 2018

A marvelous poem with a meaningful message. Each and every stanza is embedded with words of wisdom. Yes, every action has a corresponding reaction. Well crafted write.10

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Dr Dillip K Swain 20 December 2017

Newton’s third law states, “For every action, there is an equal and opposite reaction”. Your poem depicts the sublime voice that confirms scientific perspective! “Through bad action sin is earned/Action gives reaction sooner or later… We should be careful in life always”……Your write provide a precious message to the society! Thanks dear sir for sharing this valuable poem!

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Gandam, Dist-Deogarh, Odisha, INDIA
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