We become worried for suffering,
Sorrow breaks us giving agony,
We pray God to give relief from,
Nobody likes problems in life.
We are free to perform actions,
Knowingly or unknowingly,
Due to negative vibrations,
We commit mistakes in our actions.
Through bad action sin is earned,
Action gives reaction sooner or later,
Without giving fruit this does not go,
We should be careful in life always.
This is our action that punishes us,
We should stay away from negativity,
Negative motivation is dangerous,
We need no sufferings in life.
© Kumarmani Mahakul,5, July 2017. All rights reserve.
Each action brings reaction. Sinful actions give us punishment. This poem is just brilliant.
True...! All of us long for happiness! All our actions are centred on earning joy and success in life. If we should get a joyful life, we have to tune our actions in such a way as to receive good results! Every action has an equal and opposite reaction. Thus we are taught to sow good seeds to yield and harvest good crops. A poem of lofty thoughts!
As per action we receive reaction. This is very true really. Sweet flute of God produces sweet sound for learning. We feel God's love with greatest sweetness. His flute is nice. You are a nice poet and this poem is an excellent poem.
A marvelous poem with a meaningful message. Each and every stanza is embedded with words of wisdom. Yes, every action has a corresponding reaction. Well crafted write.10
Newton’s third law states, “For every action, there is an equal and opposite reaction”. Your poem depicts the sublime voice that confirms scientific perspective! “Through bad action sin is earned/Action gives reaction sooner or later… We should be careful in life always”……Your write provide a precious message to the society! Thanks dear sir for sharing this valuable poem!
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
To stay away from negativity! ! Nice advice. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.