This Is Not Right Poem by Lawrence S. Pertillar

This Is Not Right

Rating: 5.0


You may as well reveal it,
When the time comes
For it to be revealed.
Concealing misdeeds done,
Wont heal.
And feelings hurt,
Are not going to stop dirt...
Scooped up and thrown,
Overnight!
Especially if someone has been lied upon,
And the one responsible
Has done this out of spite!
To incite and ignite.
Was that you?
This is not right.
And things like this done,
Eventually exposes deception,
In broad daylight.
Leading to further misunderstandings...
With the wrong people left not speaking.
And those not involved,
Cursing each other into fights!
This is not right.
It is better to be direct.
Than to get upset...
By weaving a web of hatred,
And deception...
One will regret!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ernestine Northover 28 April 2008

How right you are Lawrence, very cleverly woven poem, and it says it all. Regret eats into the soul. Enjoyed reading this one. Love and hugs Ernestine XXX

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~ Jon London ~ 28 April 2008

A very true and important message, your creation points to this with such excellence...great work...I enjoy reading your work, Thanks for sharing all the very best my friend J.L

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