Thoughts In My Mind. Poem by Ricky M

Thoughts In My Mind.

Rating: 4.5


Standing on the shore of relationships
I see the waves of love turning up
One by one and then diminishing
Going deep to the base
To never return.
What remains
Is the bunch of memories
Giving life to the body to carry
And live this otherwise a dead life.

Saturday, November 13, 2021
Topic(s) of this poem: thoughts
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr. M. Asim Nehal 14 November 2021

Excellent poem Ricky. Full Stars.

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me poet yeps poet 03 February 2022

HELLLLOOO BEAUTIFUL POEM RICKY WHERE RU

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David Wood 13 November 2021

Love can be a prickly thorn on a gentle rose.

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me poet yeps poet 06 February 2022

HELLO KID WHERE RU AND HOW TOO NICE POEMS YOU COMPOSE

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Indira Renganathan 18 July 2023

Sweet love memories always take our march forward...a lovely poem

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 13 May 2023

I totally agree with Dr. Asim Bravo! ! ! !

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Anjandev Roy 12 May 2023

Simply glorious...... enjoyed....thank u.....

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Wonderful poetry. "….. memories /Giving life to the body to carry /And live this otherwise a dead life"… quite philosophical …

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M.J. Lemon 11 April 2023

Brilliant verse, Ricky....a fine reminder of just how nourshing to the body thoughts can be!

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