Through The Dark Woods Poem by Rini Shibu

Through The Dark Woods

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Danny and Eila were on a drive
Through the woods on a foggy night
Crickets were singing in the dark
Leaves were making music of love
and wind whistled around
The moon was hiding in the clouds
No stars twinkled in the sky
Eila's odor  filled the car
A bottle of beer between the gap
They enjoyed the ride through
the haunted road
Flashing light on wet grass
And the romantic night kissed them both
The wind became still at the sight
And the two lovers disappeared in the dark

Tuesday, November 28, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: driving,lovers,night,woods
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Edward Kofi Louis 03 December 2017

The romantic night! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Rini Shibu 03 December 2017

Thanks Edward for posting your comment

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Kumarmani Mahakul 29 November 2017

An imaginative and romantic poem shared hauntingly. Thrilling expression. Thank u dear Rini.

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Rini Shibu 29 November 2017

Thanks Kumar.. Glad that you liked it

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Saravanan Sivasubramanian 28 November 2017

Dear poet, The poem is reveals normal night and mystery night. until the last line the reader think that both of them (lovers) is normal human being. from the last line only the reader can understand that those were departed souls from earth. in this poem u mingle nature and the philosophy of life (after death) . my best wishes Rini

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Rini Shibu 29 November 2017

Thanks Saravanan for your comment..

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Lamar Cole 28 November 2017

This is a very nice poem about through the dark woods. It also has an air of mystery.

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Rini Shibu 28 November 2017

Thanks Lam.. Mystery increases curiosity and interest

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 28 November 2017

A lovely write about love and nature. The lovers' escapade is amazing.

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Rini Shibu 28 November 2017

Thanks Rose, glad that you liked it

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